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Butterflies are Dying Today by ~mree:iconmree:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Abstract


I think
the butterflies are dying today
They scratch at my windows
with their tissue paper wings
Screaming into my dreams
Today is the day, I think they say
But in the morning the glass is silent
And all I see left are
fragments of kaleidoscopes
no hopes
Only powder stains
remain.
©2004-2009 ~mree
:iconmree:

Author's Comments

i got bored. o____O; so i'm uploading.......*gasp*.....prose! @_@ well, poetry to be more exact, and pretty crapass poetry at that~~ hope i don't scar your lovely eyes, o viewer. >:D (those poor butterflies, nyo! O_o)

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~duet-with-knives Apr 2, 2004, 6:51:22 PM
Holy Sweden this is amazing..

no.. words..

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I don't like your tragic sighs
as if your god has passed you by well hey fool
that's your deception
your angels speak with jilted tongues
the serpent's tale has come undone you have no
strength to squander
The only comfort is the moving of the river
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~slimjim136 Apr 2, 2004, 6:52:48 PM
wow...makes me kinda sad...but it's so good...

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=christians
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~soxfox Apr 2, 2004, 6:54:34 PM
Crapass my ass! This is lovely ^_^
:iconalasse:
=Alasse Apr 2, 2004, 6:54:43 PM
I like this a lot. *imagines poem* Poor butterflies.
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~Mandie-chan Apr 2, 2004, 7:01:56 PM
Waaahh! It makes me so sad when butterflies lose their feather dust stuff..

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:penguin: The penguins are gonna get youuuu! :penguin:
:iconaaliguasse:
~aaliguasse Apr 2, 2004, 7:03:29 PM
Great poem. "Tissue paper wings" really emphasize their fragile-ness. "Fragments of kaleidoscopes"... past glory gone.
How sad, though I fear and hate butterflies.

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:ufo:
:iconmandah2000:
~mandah2000 Apr 2, 2004, 7:05:13 PM
whoa awesome prose! lovely emotive language! :heart:

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:heart:
:iconmk13:
~mk13 Apr 2, 2004, 7:12:31 PM
awww that's beautiful=D
:iconbananablah:
~bananablah Apr 2, 2004, 8:08:16 PM
... Eerie. *shudders* Those images are just so vivid...
:iconkingdomheartsfan:
~kingdomheartsfan Apr 2, 2004, 8:10:23 PM
wow O.O

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